You are a member of a sport club. Write a letter to the club president about an event that will be organized.
In your letter, you should tell:
what it is
who I am inviting
what my role is in this event.
Dear Mr. President,
I am writing to inform you about our plan for the upcoming event, that will be arranged at the football court of the club, on the 25th of December 2019, the second day of Christmas.
Their will be a friendly football game between Team A and the old team. Before the match there is an opening ceremony, local singers and bands will play and sing Christmas songs. Then the play will take off, after you will present the trophies for all the players and coaches; at the end there is a small reception inside the basketball court for everyone.
During this event, all local people and the players family are invited. Additionally, we will send an official invitation for the city Council, members and council’s employees, and a special request will be sent for Mr.Georges Shaw the parliament member from our city. All local channels will broadcast it live on TV.
I would like to let you know, that I’ll be organizing and following the campaign for this event, on television, radio and social media. I need your approval to appear in some TV programs, in order to introduce the event and invite other people from new places to come and visit club.
Sincerely Yours,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'players'' or 'player's'?
Suggestion: players'; player's
...ng this event, all local people and the players family are invited. Additionally, we wi...
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Line 11, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Georges
...d a special request will be sent for Mr.Georges Shaw the parliament member from our cit...
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Line 11, column 312, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lives'?
Suggestion: lives
...y. All local channels will broadcast it live on TV. I would like to let you kno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84134615385 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49874228718 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6929820634 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.888888889 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249849368441 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864895945215 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060002210577 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16102891695 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05596807238 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.