Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, the number of vehicles on the road is increasing day by day and as a result, there is obviously an increase in the traffic. While some people believe that traffic violations should carry more rigorous punishments, others believe in lenient punishments for violation of traffic laws. I completely agree that the traffic rules should be strictly followed, and favour a strict penalty for any offences.
The main reason I advocate stricter implementation of the traffic rules is because the consequences of traffic violations is not only suffered by just the driver, but many innocent people also suffer because one person’s mistakes. For example, if a driver enters a no entry zone or drives on the wrong side of the road, there is a very high chance of an accident. If any such incident occurs not just the diver but the other person involved in the accident would also suffer due to the offender’s mistake.
In developing countries like India, the wide violations of traffic rules causes a lot of traffic jams which affects the commute time, fuel consumption, environment and many other areas of daily life. For instance, many people would park their cars on the ‘No Parking’ area of the road. This is a very simple rule which can easily be followed, but as the fine associated with this offence is petty, most people don’t bother about it and park their cars wherever they feel comfortable. As a consequence, there is a lot of traffic congestion in the populated areas of the city.
To sum up, traffic rules play a vital part in our day-to-day lives and traffic violations not just affects the offender, but also the other people involved. So I personally feel that traffic rules should be strictly implemented and offenders should be punished with harsher punishments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s obviously an increase in the traffic. While some people believe that traffic violat...
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ses a lot of traffic jams which affects the commute time, fuel consumption and environment....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99628252788 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74685219813 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.527986014 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279872106468 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105296228623 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868785863198 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172548000217 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798475557397 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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