Life today is easier and comfortable then it was when your grandparents were children.
Not ones have my grandparents expressed their complaints over the topic that when they were kids they did not have the opportunities and contrivances, today’s children are provided with. So, it goes without saying that life has undergone through a lot of transformations and advances. Therefore, in my estimation, the complaints of my grandparents are totally justified and I am strongly of the opinion that life has become much easier, in comparison with my grandparents’ time. I will elaborate on the reasons supporting my standpoint in the following body paragraphs.
To begin with, during the last few decades a myriad of scientific contributions and technological booms have been introduced in all aspects of life. Due to these advances, now we are released from most of the difficult and strenuous work, as the technology and robots has come to our rescue. Let’s take the house chores as an example. Our grandmothers had to prepare food, clean the house, do the washing up and even wash the clothes themselves. In contrast, now some robots and special machines have relieved us from this labor. Specifically, there are various robot cleaners, able to vacuum the whole house in just a few minutes, washing machines, both for dishes and clothes, microwave ovens and also air cleaning devices. Therefore, as we can see in this modern era housewives’ main occupation has ceased to remain the same as before.
Secondly, for the time being we have the most ground-breaking innovation of all times, at our disposal, the internet. Heretofore, people did not have any much available sources to get information, knowledge and help from. But now, the internet has become our number 1 assistant in very diverse situations. For example, previously my grandparents had to go out into the street, travel a long distances to buy a newspaper to read news. Now, due to the always-available access to the internet, we can be posted about anything that takes place in the world with a single click on our smartphones.
In the light of the reasons mentioned above, I will definitely declare that the life has improved at an exponential rate over the decades, when my grandparents were children, and that is mainly due to the advent of new technological and scientific innovations and undoubtedly due to the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es to buy a newspaper to read news. Now, due to the always-available access to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14173228346 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18631495177 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595800524934 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5981184814 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.235294118 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135742721814 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034741762197 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582052975096 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951436354726 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081438944153 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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