Tpo44 integrated essay
A European silver coin which is back to the eleventh century found in maine state of United state. The passage explains reasons given by some archiologists to justify that it is a fake coin not a genuine one. In contrast, the lecturer states that there is a possibility that it is a coin brought to the Maine by the Norse, European explorer, so she provides some reasons to make it clear.
First of all, some archiologist believe that the coin found in the North America is fake. others thinks it isn't a fake con, though based on the speaker. The author mentions that the place where the coin found is far from the other places where the Norse were, therefore it is not feasable that the Norse could travel there. As a comparison, it is mentioned in the lecture that they could travel there. The lecturer points out that many other objects found there which represents that the norse could reach the site where the coin found.
Second, the speaker opposes the auther's second reason by saying this fact that if it haven;t been found other coin, it dosen't mean that they didn't bring any coin there because there is a possibility that they have brought back their coins.
Finally, the speaker ignores the last reason given by author. she states that these kind of coin would be appealing for americans because of their beauty, so they could count on these kind of coins as a jwelery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Others
...oin found in the North America is fake. others thinks it isnt a fake con, though based...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...North America is fake. others thinks it isnt a fake con, though based on the speaker...
^^^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...nd other coin, it dosent mean that they didnt bring any coin there because there is a...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...gnores the last reason given by author. she states that these kind of coin would be...
^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...reason given by author. she states that these kind of coin would be appealing for american...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...of their beauty, so they could count on these kind of coins as a jwelery.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, in contrast, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 7.30242825607 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21899284729 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506072874494 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2900995565 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416637562567 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154879687128 0.0996497079465 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872022871361 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236346766103 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519893440358 0.0443174109184 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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