In some countries, some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying their own homes. Does renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place?
It is a common trend in many nations that some people prefer rented apartments, whilst others purchase their own houses. Although it is purely based on their personal choices, I believe that leased stay has more benefits than owned property.
Admittedly, having its own home is advantageous as it would aid people to have a stable life in one place. In other words, a permanent dwelling place refers to the condition in which family could stay at that place for a longer period of time without any fear of being shifted. Moreover, it is a one-time investment plan and also there is no need to pay the monthly rent to any landlord. Therefore, one could have a peaceful life at this own place, however, it is quite costly to purchase a new home.
Nevertheless, rented residences are affordable to the majority of the population, A wide range of such properties are available in different price slabs and one could select his/her accommodation according to the location and desired facilities as well. For instance, in big cities, it is often difficult to acquire a piece of land for living, but there are a variety of apartments available on rent basis which are easily accessible and financially viable. In addition to this, people whose job is not permanent and have to shift their jobs regularly; rented flat is the best option for them. It would also facilitate them to move from one location to another easily and conveniently. Thus, these properties are beneficial in most of the aspects.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that having owned permanent residence offers stability in life both mentally and physically, but everyone could not possess it. So, the rented house is one of the suitable alternatives to lead a better life in a house with desirable features
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...y could stay at that place for a longer period of time without any fear of being shifted. More...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93355481728 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76992346848 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6275544651 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245203389335 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079525303894 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640851832619 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146438872586 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775376538501 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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