Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper, will remain the main source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement
A high-tech society allows people live in the better and more convenient than the earlier years, especially Internet. Some people believe that even so the amount of people used online media to approach news, traditional newspaper still remain the main place in future. I firmly disagree with this unreasonable thinking with lots of reasons, which will addressed in this essay.
To begin with, one of the most attractive reason of reading news on the online sources is their easy access. The Internet spread out every corner of the world and easy to connect with many technological products, which has become essential part of modern life such as smart phone, smart watch, and so on. Moreover, the speed in updating the online news source is faster than the printed newspaper, which has many important stages including editing and printing before publishing. People are not necessary to buy newspaper so this improvement is the best way not to save only money but resource also.
Another benefit from online news is the best way to approach the reality information. The traditional newspaper has lots of limitation such as transforming, while the online newspaper has of uploading videos or record possibility to aid the accuracy of information, the printed news is hard to transform to readers. Moreover, online news create the comment space for people can express their feeling, experience after reading.
In conclusion, I disagree that the traditional newspaper remain the main source of news for community in the digital life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, while, even so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20564516129 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68273071602 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2814262799 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.363636364 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288588350792 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107239005043 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628088576664 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187679215663 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603433082463 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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