The passage and lecture are arguing over whether the old found fossil structure proves that bees existed on earth as early 200 million years ago. The author rejects this idea by providing three reasons. On the contrary, the professor believes this old fossil structure belonged to bees and reject these reasons one by one.
firstly, in the passage is said that there the oldest fossils of bee have been found is 100 milion years old and there is no fossil that prove the bees lived in 200 million years ago. On the other side, the professor believes that this reason is not convincing, since there should be specific circumstanc for preserving the bees' bodies. Therefore, it is unlikely to find a 200 years tree which preserved a bee's structure.
Secondly, the author mentions that there were no flowers in 200 years ago which bees feed from them. However, the professor explains that bees might provide their food for some non flowering like fur and pine trees. Hence, the bees change their source of food after advent of the flowers.
Finally, the passage author maintains that this found structure does not have one specific feature of the bees's nest and it might be the nest of other insects. In contrast, the professor rebuts this point and she asserts that some chemical analysis indicates that some water proof substance of this fossil is similar to moderns'.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd reject these reasons one by one. firstly, in the passage is said that the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
... reject these reasons one by one. firstly, in the passage is said that there the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee which preserved a bees structure. Secondly, the author mentions that there...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f food after advent of the flowers. Finally, the passage author maintains th...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: waterproof
...e chemical analysis indicates that some water proof substance of this fossil is similar to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24352462258 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8667201046 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06452816374 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393095286058 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155149068672 0.0996497079465 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16269474013 0.0662205650399 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240886250977 0.162205337803 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142922827136 0.0443174109184 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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