My Dreams

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My Dreams

Dream is desire. The person definitely has dream. In the future I want to be success. Dream is race because if someone wants to be something. You must have dream because dream is the first step for reaching your purpose. Dream is motivation. Dream is important for young people to get better life.

My dreams in the future, I want to take program of medical. I want to continue my study in Jogja. Because many family going to outside of my hometown, and University in Jogja I think well than in my hometown. My father always follows my wish. I just choose then my parents always support me. My par...

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Dream is desire
Dream is a desire

I want to be success
I want to be successful

program of medical
program of medicine

University in Jogja I think well than in my hometown
University in Jogja I think is better than that in my hometown

should share to other, don’t arrogant
should share to others, don’t be arrogant

I want to be success in the job
I want to be successful in the job

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Different Words: 153 200

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 33 15
No. of Words: 356 350
No. of Characters: 1443 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.344 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.053 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.23 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.788 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.735 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.303 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.548 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.236 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5