Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
It is considered by some people that the internet has got humankind together, while others argue that the internet has separated the community. In my opinion, I believe that, even though it has a few disadvantages, the internet brings people closer.
On the one hand, many consider the internet to be a very crucial medium of communication to contact other people. The Internet offers different applications to communicate with people in various ways. It helps people to have closer interaction with a number of features. The Internet is very useful for bringing closer even people from other countries. People can find new companions on the Internet through a wide range of applications. In times of urgency or danger,internet can be reliably used to request help by sharing the location and other details. On different platforms, we can meet people with similar interests and get closer to form Communities. With millions of followers from different countries, Reddit stands as a prime example.
On the other hand, some believe that the internet is making people lonely. People are getting addicted to the virtual world that has impacts on their well being. Many mental disorders that are unheard of, are being diagnosed every day due to continuous and reckless usage. People are preferring virtual interaction than real interaction. As a result, relationships with people are being affected.
Finally, I believe that the internet has many benefits and is an effective model for communication. Too much of anything is bad and when people use the internet limitlessly they get addicted. Hence, people should be responsible and use the internet in a proper manner.
In conclusion, the internet is a useful method to communicate when used responsibly and becomes harmful when used carelessly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94598361239 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4433480249 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5789473684 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318107187185 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118239756761 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073715002798 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187061120796 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862899419643 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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