The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts illustrates the amount of water utilization based on three different purposes(industrial, agricultural, domestic) in six different regions of the world(North America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia).

Agricultural usage of water dictates the chart for almost all of the regions except North America and Europe. Whereas, Central Asia shows the highest water usage with 88% which is the maximum percentage of water usage of any kind among all of the regions.

Domestic and industrial usage remain relatively similar for both Africa and Central Asia. Although, for both of these regions domestic usage exceeds industrial usages by 2%. Whereas, in North America, Europe and South East Asia, industrial usage of water is higher than that of domestic usage and even crosses the agricultural usage of water for North America and europe. At last, South America shows increased domestic usage of water which betters the industrial usage by 9% from 10% to 19%.

To conclude, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America represent a higher utilization of water for agricultural purposes whereas industrial usage gains the top position in both North America and Europe.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44919786096 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73490595831 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8819439885 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114557684661 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691776638661 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298605295765 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918075851175 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304570110106 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 61.2550243902 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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