Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society.
The importance of invention of mobile phone which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked with controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will elaborate the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one is that they mobile phone has proved very effective and uses in daily life. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is whole system of interaction and communication is changing with the introduction of mobile phones.
Elaborating my viewpoint this trend has some merits but one of the crucial effect is that human beings can take its help in setting alarm and they can do the work of watch. Besides, people can talk overseas with the help of mobile phones. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of mobile phone are indeed too ignore.
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...the benefits of mobile phone are indeed too ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04455445545 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66439672365 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0634345224 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.9 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0435315839517 0.242375264174 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0168503122268 0.0925447433944 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272260177492 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0230195191826 0.151781067708 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262007793679 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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