The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The libraries are the repositories of never-ending knowledge. The public libraries should only focus in lending books to people rather than squandering their cost a limited resource in providing hi-tech media such as computer software’s, DVDs and CDs. In my opinion, I strongly agree that libraries should include latest technological means of providing knowledge
The installation of technology is very expensive and the traditional libraries cannot afford such huge investment on the same. Moreover, libraries are meant to provide the ambience and surrounding that motivate people to read books and gain knowledge, with the availability of videos and audios will distract the mind of people and the overall objective of the library will be lost.
Despite of some of the few negatives attached to having the latest technology in libraries, the idea that they are useless and do no provide knowledge is completely preposterous as CDs and DVDs do not occupy much of shelf space than the books. The use of latest media applications like computer software and and documentaries will help people to gain the understanding about the various aspects with the use of videos and pictures, and there is a justified verbalisation that people tend to remember the videos and images for a longer period of time rather than mugging up the content from books. Furthermore, individuals can read novels and books on laptops and computers at the comfort of their home or while travelling and will not be required to carry heavy books. To elucidate, CDs and DVDs with cartoon videos and songs for children will help them to gain better understanding which they will remember for their entire life
To conclude, I vehemently agree that the libraries should enable them with advanced technology and media applications as this will increase their significance and needs in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'include the latest'.
Suggestion: include the latest
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Suggestion:
...chnological means of providing knowledge The installation of technology is very e...
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Suggestion: some
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Suggestion: of the latest
... of shelf space than the books. The use of latest media applications like computer softwa...
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Suggestion: and
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...mber the videos and images for a longer period of time rather than mugging up the content from...
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...they will remember for their entire life To conclude, I vehemently agree that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24252491694 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93825601638 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521594684385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.423750996 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.428571429 106.682146367 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316809025146 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130254443071 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861495158671 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195092900036 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726736366819 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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