Some people think that it is more important to be informed of local/national news. Other people think that it's more important to have international news. Discuss both sides and give your Opinion.
People hold various opinions on keeping themselves abreast of the latest happenings. Some say that it is crucial to be aware of the domestic news while others state that rather than this, more significant is to know about the changes occurring in various parts of the world. I believe one should be knowledgeable about their own country as well as about the global world.
To begin with, keeping knowledge about the domestic news assists a person to carry out certain things in their routine life easily. If he knows what is happening in a particular area, he will be able to plan his activities in a better way. For instance, if I was not aware of the strike by the factory workers on the main road, I would not be able to reach at an office for an interview because I would be stuck in a jam pack traffic. Therefore, it is important for the citizens to be aware of what is happening within the country.
On the other hand, having information about different other countries is vital. It not only broadens the horizons but also, persuades people to do something good to bring good name to their country. Take IT inventions, for example, when people made breakthrough discoveries in this field, other individuals from various countries took it as an epitome that they should utilize their potential and try to do and achieve something further than this, in order to improve a particular item’s function. We see efficient models of computers and laptops as a result of this. So, I believe being aware of the global news is also important.
To conclude, although to remain knowledgeable of the home country's situation would allow a citizen to plan their programmes in a better way, I believe acquiring information about the global world would motivate him or her to make significant improvements in various fields. Hence, both of these are crucial to be aware of.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81790123457 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71498295562 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8418063593 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16546402656 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06042147517 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427348797803 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964321045305 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403070838095 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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