Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basic. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time.
It is true that there are few people who can keep the habit of walking regularly. This problem results from several reasons and they should be tackled by individuals as well as the governments.
The amount of time for daily walking has decreased due to two main reasons. The first reason cause is the development of technology with the appearance of lifts and escalators everywhere, especially in offices or shopping centers. In spite of convenience and time-saving benefits, this also encourages laziness when someone, for example, even uses the lift to move between two floors. The second reason is the overuse of private vehicles such as cars and motorbikes, which has discouraged people in walking, even for a short distance. In fact, parents tend to take their children to school by cars although their houses near the school gates for the fear of busy roads.
Measures must be taken by governments and each individual to solve the this serious problem issue. First, regulations should be imposed to restrict the unnecessary use of lifts in low-rise buildings and encourage the usage of stairs. With the sense of restrictions, apparently, there would be more people who are willing to walk some physical stairs instead of troubling themselves with automatic ones. For instance, at some hospitals in Vietnam, except for patients and medical personnel, users need to pay a certain amount of money to utilise the elevators, and this policy has resulted in an increasing number of people climbing stairs and also saved the facility for emergency purposes. Secondly, cars should be discouraged in short-distance journeys and people should go on foot instead. For instance, parents can walk with their children to go to school every morning.
In conclusion, the issue that only a few people take up walking as a part of their daily life results from several reasons, but if governments and individuals take appropriate steps immediately, this problem may be implemented solved soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in short, such as, as well as, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36395759717 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96307398898 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600706713781 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6420314113 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178028667397 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623569902357 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344871643865 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107001403374 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215837827204 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.