Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer
Personally, I see more positive than negative aspects in life today, so I strongly agree with that. Firstly, today the travelling is way more affordable and secondly we have so many more ways to entertain ourselves than before.
To begin with, Bulgaria is ex- comunism country and as such region, people who lived there were not able to travel for business , pleasure or for searching a better opportunities for living . Now everything has been changed . We travel a lot easier with faster cars onto new highways and with airplanes that we could spend the weekend in cities such as London or Vienna and to be on our working place at the beginning of the week .All of this without any prohibitions or restrictions like before. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience . for example, I want to study abroad and this is also possible as part as free movement of people. Therefore, you become a citizen of the world very easy.
Likewise, today youth can entertain themselves with so many different sources .They can go go to a concert of their favourite west rock group , watching the newest Hollywood movies on the tablet, learn Chinesse or international cooking from videos on the internet our just stay home while we instant messing or video call with our friends around the globe while we sit on the couch. Our parents didn’t have all these different types of entertainment because of the development of the new technologies .They had only cafes or if they want to know more ,they needed to spend a whole day in the library in order to find the information they need. Thus, for us today it life is a lot easier than before.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons I believe that the life in our country is better .Nowadays, we travel more often and we could have excellent time wherever we want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72256097561 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60781721379 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.220502916 48.9658058833 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174223023356 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621563270716 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391566963941 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10177213378 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218305416729 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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