some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people`s lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
In modern times, the issue of happiest times among ages has become more controversial. While it can be argued that the teen years are the happiest times of most people`s lives, another opinion is that adult life brings more happiness. In this essay I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Based in my knowledge, adult life is simple and more convenient. The adult man feel that he had done everything he wanted and the time for relaxing is now. As an example, my grandfather does no work because he is adult and this tradition among all families in our countryside. Therefore, adult people feel more comfortable and live simply life.
The teen years are more exiting and the happiest times of most people`s live. I believe the main reason for that is because they feel that they are free and the bright future waits them. Furthermore, the activities which they are doing might be one of the reasons. For instance, when I was teenager I felt I am the happiest one just because I have the chance to hang out with my friends. According to study, in one city in Australia they found out that the teenagers are the happiest people in the society. Hence, teen years might be the happiest years of people`s life.
In conclusion, the issue of happiest times of people`s lives raises strong passions in both sides of the argument. My personal view is that teen years are the happiest years of people`s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: of the happiest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the happiest'.
Suggestion: of the happiest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e happiest years of people's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81496062992 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66487451921 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503937007874 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7560542539 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358328423244 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138224932211 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118675351892 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242394061285 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786063044253 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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