"Prevention is better than cure."
Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is argued by some that 70-80% of the nation's health-care budget should be transferred in education people and prevention techniques. this essay agrees with the above statement. Firstly, this essay will discuss how the government campaign could help youngsters with a healthy diet and secondly, explain that complimentary gym services with regular health check-ups could prevent dangerous diseases, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Educating people with a government-sponsored awareness program could help them in maintaining better health. In other words, many people are not aware of the diet; they should take in their daily routine. some people become addicted to alcohol and drugs; they assume if they stop consuming these products, it will harm their bodies. The government campaign could help people to understand about the balanced diet. they could help people with a proper regimen so that they will remain in good shape. For example, the survey conducted by The Times in March 2019 reported that the United Kingdom provides free vitamin capsules to every nation's child till the age of 14, in order to maintain their body growth.
With the balanced diet, physical activities are equally mandatory and routine check-ups gives detail information about the food which should be followed. this is a reason that the government should apply taxpayers' money in launching open-air gym with free essential health check-ups so that every individual could take participate in these activities. For instance, the study showed in Amity University in 2017 reported that in Delhi after opening free medical services, the count of patients in government hospitals had been decreased by 9%.
To conclude, this essay suggests that a significant part of any nation's health budget should be directly sent towards the government-sponsored program to educate citizens about proper nutrition. Open-air gym and no-cost medical complexes should be installed to prevent any future diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54575163399 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84222808692 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5855383702 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.214285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180138745249 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734303003179 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659345563388 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13060032948 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072250843164 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.