The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003 and projections for 2050.
The chart demonstrates the overall world population of four countries namely india, US, china and japan in 1950 and 2002. it also provides the predicted population of those countries in 48 years later. it can be seen in general that china had the largest inhabitants in the past, but in the future, the world largest population title is prospected to belong to india.
Starting with india, the country contributed 15% of the world inhabitants in 1950 and 17% in 2002, that number is foreseen to keep rising to about 19% in 2050.
china and japan, however, experienced a downward trend in such scale. There were 23% and just under 5% of the world residents were from china and japan respectively in 1950. 52 years later, those proportions dropped to 20% and 3% respectively. The figures are predicted to continue to decline in the future, in which 15% of the world residents are Chinese while around 1% is Japanese.
US’s population accounted for 6% in 1950, before decreasing into 5% in 2002, and is prospected to remain stable in the next 48 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8956043956 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69840081987 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4195314745 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227726947986 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881086301942 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695051791886 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134578745471 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519501661969 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.