Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain the why the center is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closed.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you after reading the notification shared by the secretory of our building regarding the closure of the sports and leisure center from 1st of January 2020, primarily due to the funding issues.
Most people in this residential locality are deeply saddened by this decision of the local council. This is the only sports club accessible to the public in the area, and almost everyday large number of children, women and grandparents spend their time here doing various activities.
The physical and mental benefits of spending time outdoors is immeasurable, children look forward to meet their friends and play every evening rather than engaging in screen time, women find spending time in the club therapeutic, older people take the opportunity to socialize. The center is a space for all the people in the community irrespective of their nationality or any other differences to join together and live.
The major drawback of shutting this club is having no space within the community for everyone to socialize; children would be forced to stay indoors the overall health of the community would find a downfall.
Finally, for the benefit of the people, would be delighted if the financials can be reworked and there could be a halt in closing down the club.
Thanks.
Yours Sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 99, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... is immeasurable, children look forward to meet their friends and play every evening ra...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erences to join together and live. The major drawback of shutting this club is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22119815668 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70503379655 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1929089548 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.857142857 76.5299724578 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 31.0 16.8248392259 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120128585407 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652673046918 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639786387028 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498522729042 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403726931534 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 8.37731958763 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 70.7449484536 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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