07/11/2017
A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house
tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear Uncle John,
I am so excited that finally, you planned to visit my place. but I am sorry some urgent meeting came up and I have to extend my hours in the office. Although, my friend Aditya, would be waiting for you to welcome you. If you remember, he lives in the next door. There will be food in the refrigerator and bed will be made.
The best way to arrive from the railway station is to take Metro. it would not be crowdy by your time and you will get a proper seat to sit. my house is after two stations and it is popular by the name of Rajiv chowk. you will find so many holding of the station name.
I'll be back no later than 6, so we could go to your favorite Italian restaurant for a dinner, where we went last time.
it's going to be great catching up with you.
best Regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...finally, you planned to visit my place. but I am sorry some urgent meeting came up ...
^^^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...m the railway station is to take Metro. it would not be crowdy by your time and yo...
^^
Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... and you will get a proper seat to sit. my house is after two stations and it is p...
^^
Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... is popular by the name of Rajiv chowk. you will find so many holding of the statio...
^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... many holding of the station name. Ill be back no later than 6, so we could go...
^^^
Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[3]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'for dinner'.
Suggestion: for dinner
... go to your favorite Italian restaurant for a dinner, where we went last time. its goin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...a dinner, where we went last time. its going to be great catching up with you....
^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...a dinner, where we went last time. its going to be great catching up with you....
^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
... to be great catching up with you. best Regards, Aman
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18238993711 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03723108897 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2091580468 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.4166666667 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290387052059 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10300565293 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756704522906 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167256342851 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638379946683 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.