Nowadays, by developing in all aspects of our lives such as technology, amenities, hobbies and other parts of routine life we have unexpectedly more options to choose rather in comparison to our ancestors our grandparents. In my opinion, by time goes by, mankind has more opportunities to select suitable choices.
The world in the 21st century, people want to live more comfortably and without any stress and hesitation, so they try to invent or create some innovative things to make life pretty easier than before. For instance, in the last decade when it comes to the hobby, they had a few numbers of fun to do like outdoor gathering, but currently by development in technology, social media, game consoles or other inventions are added as the option of the hobby to amuse people in their leisure time.
In addition, no one can deny the influence of public transportation as the option that does not exist in many years ago. Furthermore, even compare to the last century, today we have new kinds of facilities like subway, monorail, etc. Likewise, trains and airplanes have more obvious improvements in speed and capacity to go faster and carry more passengers respectively. In medical problems, scientist finds some ways to provide life with ease. To exemplify, vaccines and drugs can conquer the contagious disease and relieve aches.
In brief, these days we have greatly more choice in almost all parts of our lives compare to the past and this comes to true through some up-to-the-minute inventions in each category like transportation, hobby, and medical problems. From my point of view, life is easier than before.
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- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems 61
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, likewise, so, for instance, in addition, in brief, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04814814815 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87066665138 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637037037037 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5913442628 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.909090909 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120750672009 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397230148878 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256060690763 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705705296278 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110916233163 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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