Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The salary of some successful athletes are higher than this of other specialists worldwide. While some people claim that it is completely fair, others believe that it is injustice and other experts must be considered. This essay will discuss both point of view and I finally give my personal opinion on it.
On the one hand, triumph athletes must be paid attention monetarily. They devote their personal life in their chosen sport branch entirely and spend too much time in either a gym or sport camp to achieve golden medal in international contests which can bring endless happiness for their compatriots. An obvious example of this is Hasan Yazdani, who has gained the golden medal of the last Olympic Games in wrestling. In addition, the period of sportsman’s sporty life is also short, so the must raise money for their later life when they are retired. However, it can be rational they earn more money than other experts.
On the other hand, the endeavor of other experts should not be neglected. They have invested their both time and money in either university or vocational college for achieving knowledge to be capable and providing a better life for themselves in the future. Furthermore, in some cases, the experienced specialists have to spend long hours in tough and hazardous circumstances which a massive proportion of people cannot endure them. Mining experts and police officers are distinct instance of this.
In conclusion, I personally believe that, although athletes spend too much time in the gym and do more exercise tirelessly, the huge gap in wages of them and other skillful employee is neither justice nor healthy.
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...oth point of view and I finally give my personal opinion on it. On the one hand, triumph ath...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...finally give my personal opinion on it. On the one hand, triumph athletes must b...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to sport'
Suggestion: to sport
...ote their personal life in their chosen sport branch entirely and spend too much time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0695970696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69908444172 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5443210205 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231736787722 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881170274417 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747121669394 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14623302435 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103580976533 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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