Many animal species in the world are become extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human being. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many animal species are dying out because of some reasons as well as human are also facing many issues. In this essay all the basic reasons will lighten up and the best opinion from my view will be declared in the conclusion.
The one side of coin, human blindly run behind materialistic things for their comfort and luxuries lifestyle. To achieve all luxuries people are working down to dust, because of this they have no time to look after their family and social life; health is also affected because of overload work and hectic schedule which is cause of strss and health issues. The innovation is blindly followed by human and industries get try to fulfil requirement by increasing production and for that they need more and more expiation which allow them to deforestation and make concrete jungles. As due to deforestation environment become unbalanced and it became a hazardous for every living species on world. As I can say in present time the problem which are dangers for mankind, they are only responsible for that.
The other side of coin, the animal species are up to it's end because of lack of habitat for their living. Other major factor for decreasing population of flora and fluna is some medical companies are use animals as product testing object and after the experiments they can not survive and lost their life. But the thing is animals are very important part of surrounding. It is also a part of environment and basic food chain, if we lost the animal species the environmental balance become unstable and it is not good for human also. Animals are beautiful creature of nature and they have also right to live. If we lost the flora and fluna then upcoming generation will be not able to know about the natural beauty.
To conclude, the animal is important to maintain the environmental balance and to survival of mankind. So, people should focus to protect the animals from dying out instead of looking their own problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 528, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85207100592 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54316917722 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529585798817 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2690506598 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247440657693 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845908587792 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709489953339 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160855339804 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530263187093 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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