When designing a building, some people think that the intended use of the building should be taken into account as important rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays with the growing in population it is a must to increase the amount of goods to meet the consumers needs. However, this approach is inevitable, it caused a great damage to our environment. In this essay i will discuss some of the problems assossiated with some other solutions.
First of all, Factories and companies must work for longer hours to reach the level of demands from cutomers. that means more fuel to be burned in order to operate machines, as result, more exhausts are produced that has negative effect on air quality and one of the causes of global warming. Based on that the local athourties should invest more money on finding alternative measures to run the engine with ecofriendly energy such as solar power. For instance, Germany started to applied a plan to change all power resource in all indusrty sector which help to mitigate the harmful effects on the environment.
Secondly, enivronment is the main source of raw materials which used in making products. For example if people want to produce more goods like furniture will lead to cut more trees. Hence, a fewer food and habitat for many animals and less fresh air produced. Therefor, other manfuctred tools can be used to aviod the damage happend.
In conclusion, Although provide human essentials of food and marchindices is indispensable, the problems might happend to our planet are extremely dangerous. In my modest view, all who cares about our own neature as consertive organizations have to search for other ways to fulfill people needs
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| 2019-12-01 | Sagar Gurung | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... with the growing in population it is a must to increase the amount of goods to meet th...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great damage'.
Suggestion: great damage
... this approach is inevitable, it caused a great damage to our environment. In this essay i wil...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...amage to our environment. In this essay i will discuss some of the problems assos...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...vironment. In this essay i will discuss some of the problems assossiated with some other so...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ach the level of demands from cutomers. that means more fuel to be burned in order t...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: FEWER_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'less food'?
Suggestion: less food
...e will lead to cut more trees. Hence, a fewer food and habitat for many animals and less f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69229904006 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65234375 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8662868519 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0571990682672 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199390633324 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227986776025 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334384693451 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167543222578 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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