Should students be allowed to choose their course of study or not, the reason for a recent debate. Discuss both views and give your opinion and support it will any relevance reasons or examples if applicable
There is no doubt a dispute between students and their parents might happen, because families want to direct their children to study a certain subject against their will. Although some people believe that adolescents should not be allowed to deiced, I would argue that juniors should feel free to select which course they would prefer.
On the on hand, to those who think that children should be forced to study what parents choose might argue that in this age teenagers have a lack of experience to differentiate between what is the good and bad for them. This because they have never experienced the practical life associated with no knowledge about the demands of the world and the needs of job market. For example, some pupils tend to study subject such as Art, which has fewer opportunities to procure a job. If people have a prospective career path, it might result success in all life aspects.
On the other hand, I completely support the view of adults should let students take the decision, in order to allow them to follow their passion. If a member of society learn about a favorite subject great outcomes should be expected which will be beneficial for the country. For instance, many great sports stars narrate their personal stories how people advice them to focus on other subjects such as math or physics. In contrast, many doctors and engineers left their jobs, regretting choosing this course from the beginning and starting career shift. Unless teens choose an interested subject a feel of disenchantment will appear, even if a plum is granted.
In conclusion, children might need to be navigated because the lack of experience but, tracking their passions are better. I reaffirm that the second opinion is better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9897260274 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50717444931 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8389824213 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219914117407 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738128712681 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469081850611 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128571939022 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567569429295 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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