In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
In a quite changing world the vast majority of women now are working full-time jobs, replacing men in various occupations. As a result, Fathers are the ones responsible of children instead. In this essay the reasons and ramification of this trend will be discussed associated with my own opinion.
On of the most significant causes is, women have a chance for a good education as well as men, in the old days the society tend to care about teaching boys rather than girls. This predominant because they used to take the primary stage or essentials only in order to look after their families as early marriage was ubiquitous. For example, In 19 century, the average age of marriage was between 16 to 18 which leaves no enough time for learning. If women choose to hide at home then the world may lost many talents and potentials. A great leader such as Margret Thatcher in the UK the country would have denied of if the prime minster decided to look for her family.
However, I would argue that the precedence for mothers should to be their children, men cant not replace mothers in the role of rising sons and daughters. In addition, at dangerous stage teenagers require observe and surveillance which mothers are superior in this mission over fathers. For instance, a recent study has shown that students who have their mothers working are likelihood to fail with their studies. If women concentrate on building good future members would be lucrative to the country.
In Conclusion, the percentage of working women is increasing due to equal chances of education as men. Although there are positive prospective, i think taking care of the family more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90845070423 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65716086609 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4899671628 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235147245061 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695320424018 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04282988305 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131695603999 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236536313742 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.