In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main type of rubbish. They cause water pollution and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree?
The creeping up pollution in planet Earth sending a dire warning to humanity to act upon it. One of the causes is plastic bags are used for shopping causing a detrimental effects to the water and land. I completely agree that plastic bags must be not allowed and people should look for another options instead. In this essay i will discussed the reasons why plastic bags should be banned associated with my own opinion.
First of all, although it might appear that this bags are practical, cheap and quintessential to use in every shop, they are dangerous on the environment. This predominant because they are not able to recycle and use again, which means the leftover will be thrown in the streets, into rivers and oceans. Furthermore, diseases could be spread among people, unless the government invest more in cleaning or search for another approaches. For instance, many famous food chains tend to use bags made of modified paper.
Secondly, many documentaries have shown that plastic bags kill fish and animals in the oceans and seas. Factories throw their waste into water combining with people who enjoy swimming and surfing in form of plastic materials, that go around the nicks of animals hinder them from breathing. However delegated authorities had imposed strict regulation to deter these actions, still marine life suffering from the increasing this from of pollution.
In conclusion, in order to reduce the harmful effects, an instant ban is a must. In my point of view other measures can be alternative such as paper bags.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: discuss
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... of animals hinder them from breathing. However delegated authorities had imposed stric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0233463035 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60936648854 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669260700389 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3785886088 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242338805297 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765605184718 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632816408272 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119924638012 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833047183962 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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