The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides information about what percentage of people who are 25-34 year old residences housed within a decade of 2004 and 2014. According to the bar chart the highest rate was seen in 2001 in which nearly 60 percent of people, aged 25-34, housed while the renters made up 20 percent. The lowest point seen period was the last part of the decade, 2014, that the number of owners were 35 percent whilst the number of renters peaked to the top of almost 50 percent.
In comparison, the count of home owners illustrates that it had remained stable in almost half of the decade from 2004 to 2009. In contrast, renters numbers increased significantly from 20 to 30 percent by the 2009. In the rest of the period the number of home owners decreased considerably from 60 to 45 percent. At this point renters represented the highest point of 45 percent.
To sum up, observing the bar chart, it is easily apperant that people preferred to rent a house rather than to buy one.
Overall, although at the beginning of the ten-year period 60 percent people were housed by 2004, it collapsed from 60 percent to 35 percent. This is most probably due to extortinate prices of houses.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4956924341 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0378185103 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119190620901 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504045247542 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633810344712 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074652731733 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456979155828 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.