The advice from the grandparents is of no use to their grandchildren because the world has changed a lot over the past 50 years.
it is very controversial whether advice from the grandparents is useful for the current generation only due changed circumstance than their time. In order to examine a correct interpretation of this issue, a myriad of element should be taken into consideration. some hold the view that the grandfather advice no longer applicable in present generation because there is marked difference between previous condition where they lived and the present condition full of new idea and innovation. but, still some believe, the advice from their forefather is useful. From my vantage point, I concur with former group and aver that their suggestion might not be useful in the most cases. what I follows i will cogently justify my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that grandfather may hold the superstitious believe which may not be wise to follow in this generation. In fact, they believed the many useless belief which may be problematic in today's world. To relate this context, I want to give vivid example of my own to shed light on it. my grandfather were belong to the 90's. During that period, most of the people had faith in the tantra and mantra. Even in present, he suggests us to follow this procedure before medication. Sometimes it results more problematic situation. Earlier my childhood, I was so sick due to diarrhoea but, I was performed this ritual before medication. However, the treatment would not cause any positive in my health. Later my father took me to hospital and only after that I was fully recovered. Had my father totally relied on this practice, I would not have been writing this right now.
Secondly, another point that deserve something to say is that our grandfather may not taste the technological innovation in their time. Certainly, their most of the advice will be the same old trite figurative speech. To be more specific, they hardly give suggestion by knowing the mental environment of their child. Instead they employ their own decision on us whether we like it or not. for instance, when I was about to pursue my higher study, he was more intransigent that I had to study doctor. All in his eyes, it was only good profession for me and oblivion what other topic harbour success in the life now. By several attempts, I managed to pursue my own interest.
Lastly, although aforementioned reasons is the first that cross in our mind, there is no means only reason available. In fact, there is another subtle reasons must be borne in the mind. old people unaware about changing life culture and custom. they view the relation with same radar once they have in their mind in their time and may gave suggestion according to it. In present, boys and girls companionship is no big deal. Nevertheless, my grandfather objects present proximity between their relationship and should maintain distance between them. If I follow his suggestion in this matter, I would probably have few friends than now.
To wrap up, contemplating all the above reasons, one can realize how futile the suggestion of our grandfather will be in present generation. Their suggestion mainly based on their time and rarely change their view on changing circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2682.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 539.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9758812616 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77998731103 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515769944341 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 825.3 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3253385773 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149426747665 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371104532528 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571514605123 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984534256007 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704974175749 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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