Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details:
-Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization
-Ask for your friend to help
-Explain in detail how your friend can help
Dear Rahul,
how are you? I hope you are in pink of your health and successful in your career. I want a help from you for raising fund for 'Teach for India' NGO which supports needy children.
Since last year, I'm working with a NGO which helps poor kids who are willing to study including those who have no family and have to earn money for their survival.
I read about your work on social media and how you influence young minds. I would be obliged if you help me to generate some money for the charity and help these children.
Through social media platform, you can ask for the help and explain people how these money will be used for greater good. You will find the details of this organisation attached with this letter. You can also visit the organisation on the Malhar road near Famous bakery. The future of many children will be secured and not wasted in doing menial task
I'm eagerly waiting for your positive response for this good deed.
With lots of love,
Tasneem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...orts needy children. Since last year, Im working with a NGO which helps poor kid...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ren. Since last year, Im working with a NGO which helps poor kids who are willi...
^
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...ask for the help and explain people how these money will be used for greater good. You wil...
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Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and explain people how these money will be used for greater good. You will find ...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d and not wasted in doing menial task Im eagerly waiting for your positive respo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53072625698 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07863274416 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4160507074 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355207861157 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12387730653 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105286254446 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204024047599 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542163790865 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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