the graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufactures to produce vehicles
A glance at the graph provided a comparison on how long to manufacture a car through four different brands given in the US between 1998 and 2005.
As seen from the graph, the amount of time producing a car by four factories tended to decrease over the periods, despite some fluctuations.
Regarding the average time spent on the production of a car by General Motor, it was mostly consumed with the figure at thirty-four hours in 1998 compared to precisely twenty-eight hours of Ford. In contrast, the time spent on both Toyota and Honda was at least, which accounted for merely twenty-two hours.
The year 2002 saw a rapid decline to around twenty-five hours in the production times of Motor, then slightly drop by twenty-two hours in 2005. Despite some increases in 2001, the average time manufacturing car by Ford was likely to fall rapidly over the years, then standing at twenty-one hours in 2005. Likewise, there were fluctuating decreases of twenty-four hours in figures of Toyota and Honda by the year 2002, which were followed by a downward trend at twenty hours at the end of the period.
- Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old house in the local areas, while other think that people should have freedom to build house of their own styles. discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categorises, from 2001 -2008 73
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environ- ment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or dis- agree? 11
- Topic: as well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, so, then, at least, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92063492063 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72452353094 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.1569942737 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.857142857 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236165202996 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125290653212 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729769689345 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169168585684 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500014790998 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.