Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer .
Telling the truth has always been a interesting question, and i believe that telling the truth is of paramount importance in any relationship. And i feel this for some reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all the act of telling the truth always, would has a positive effect on the family relationships, and makes it stronger and more reliable and moreover it helps each family member have more confidence. I remember about my family that it was a rule that everyone shouldn't lie about anything, and it makes us have more self assurance about things we do, even if they were wrong.
Secondly this truthfulness could have great effect on your job too, by making a notion for your colleagues that you are a honest, reliable, and all in all a good person in the workplace, so by this notion they would trust you and also you work that you do, also if your chance for promotion in higher. I remember a friend of mine, about ten years ago that worked in a firm, and once he made a mistake , but no one even think that it was his fault, but he declared that it was him, and his bossed liked his truthfulness and after a while promoted him to higher level.
In conclusion, i am of the opinion that telling the truth always is a good idea. Because this attribute definitely has a good effect on your relations with your family and also make a good impression of you in the workplace.
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- TOEFL T P O 20 Integrated Writing Task 7
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: shouldn't
...family that it was a rule that everyone shouldnt lie about anything, and it makes us hav...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...notion for your colleagues that you are a honest, reliable, and all in all a good...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46511627907 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53488356349 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531007751938 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4079529957 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.45110844103 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187201920577 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913421977122 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789318907327 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127013946929 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663746808837 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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