It is argued by some that living in a city more beneficial than living in the countryside. In this essay i will look positive and negative aspect of both views.
For those who claim to live in a town more advantageous than living in a town show significant points. As the countrysides more engaged with nature, people's health might be much better than the ones living in a city. In contrast, Cities are more polluted and contaminated by some industries which means harmful for health. In terms of education, As technology less developed in countryside, They may focus on their education which may lead students to accomplish their education. When we look from another frame, At the same time, they may get in difficulty to find resources to reach information about their fields.
The ones who stand by living in a city more useful also presents crucial pons and cons.if we look pons of city life, Firstly, Better quality education can be provided to students to enhance their academic career, as long as they can manage how to deal with the more lots of information on internet. Secondly, there are more facilities which means more opportunities for youngsters and they may be more socialized than countrysides residents. When we consider cons, city life is much more complicated, stressful and more expensive life standards.
In conclusion, Both lifestyles illustrate the advantages and disadvantages. If the conditions are combined well. The environment conditions can be optimized which means better environment can be shaped up and better results can be gained.
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...ed up and better results can be gained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12790697674 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90824003558 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2598907887 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0915245895145 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382374213647 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309011131704 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677343719797 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222033753148 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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