Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in cities.What are the reasons?Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in young people are leaving their homes from to study or work in cities.Thanks to the ubiquity of state-of-the-art technology,modernization and globalization.There is a widespread worry that this would lead to a myriad of concerns.In my opinion,this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance.The most preponderant one is that in order to get relaxation,rural areas to study or work in cities plays crucial role in human life.Not only has the modern fast era brought a lot of opportunities all across the globe,but it has also provided various facilities to make our lives comfortable and convenient.Needless to say,all the merits stand people in goo stead,when it comes to broadening their horizons.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that in order to deal with this soaring problem government like effective steps,which are not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable.Besides,awareness program should be organised to make people aware about this issue.Last but not least, local councils and state authorities should take the necessary initiatives cumulatively.Hence,it is apparent why many are in favor of young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in cities.
In view of the arguments outlined above,one can conclude that the potential benefits of rural areas to study or work in cities are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35833333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89483275921 2.71678728327 143% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579166666667 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.5024630542 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.166873706 50.4703680194 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 321.5 104.977214359 306% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 20.9669160288 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.25397266985 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.33497536946 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31760124968 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174858006094 0.0925447433944 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789675855631 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174858006094 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789675855631 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 12.6369458128 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 53.1260098522 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.54236453202 243% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 10.9458128079 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.32886699507 137% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.94827586207 297% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.3980295567 250% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.5123152709 285% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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