You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about some important documents I might have missed after attending the IBM Monthly conference in “IBIS Hotel” on the 6th of this month.
The meeting held in the banquet hall on the second floor and I am quite sure I have the documents till the second session. During the last session, I wrapped up the documents in a hurry as the driver is waiting to pick me up. I am sure that I missed them in the main hall.
The documents and notes have important details about the conference and the contact details of the industry leaders. The summary points for all the sessions are also noted down in the same. The documents are very necessary since I need to prepare a presentation for my team at the conference that happened,by next week.
Hence, I request you to ask your staff to do a thorough search all over the main hall, the documents have an ORACLE logo and address printed on it for your reference. In case if you find them, please call me on 0409876567 or you can reach my personal number 9987654321.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Harsha Vardhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ssions are also noted down in the same. The documents are very necessary since I ne...
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Line 11, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
... my team at the conference that happened,by next week. Hence, I request you to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68599033816 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53644811593 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3782387758 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165627521883 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563399242759 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642063116167 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944972517462 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727425688007 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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