The chart below shows the number of male and female research students studying six-related subjects at a UK university in 2009
The given chart illustrates how many boys and girls participated in reasearching six different science-related subjects at a university in the UK in 2009.
As can be inferred from the data, the number of students taking part in studying Biology was the highest. Additionally, male pupils tended to have a interest in the subjects than the female, except for Veterinary medicine.
There were almost 250 boys carried out Biology, while the number of girls was 200 students. A similar pattern could be seen in the figure for Medicine, whereas the number of male and female researchers were 200 students and about 180 students respectively. In terms of Physics, the discrepancy between two genders was huge as the number of male students was relatively four fold that of female.
Astronomy and Geology were studied by the same number of boys (150 students), whereas the number of girls was roughly 60 students and about 90 students in turn. Only the figure for Veterinary medicine witnessed the number of girls being higher than that of boys by about 20 students.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-20 | Lai Nhu Phuong | 84 | view |
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. 84
- The charts below show that what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. 73
- Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and 84
- The civic centre will be planned to change There are two maps one is the existing and the other is the plan for new 82
- Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...science-related subjects at a university in the UK in 2009. As can be inferr...
^^
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... As can be inferred from the data, the number of students taking part in st...
^^
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...dditionally, male pupils tended to have a interest in the subjects than the femal...
^
Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earchers were 200 students and about 180 students respectively. In terms of Physi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0790960452 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77470735856 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564971751412 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0686557278 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.375 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32271758689 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13173141087 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855710444208 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192798160551 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740717667985 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.