You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the manager of the language school, Sally Flannigan. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sally Flannigan,
I hope that you are doing great.
The ESL course is starting eventually in the upcoming week and I have already registered in it. Unfortunately, I am writing this letter to let you know that I am experiencing certain circumstances which prevents me from enrolling in the class.
In fact, my son Bilal has some problems in his teeth although he is still young. we have been visiting the dentist for several months, consequently, a lot of work has been done so far. Yesterday we got a call from the clinic telling us to prepare for an urgent surgery next week.
Now, I am on the edge of choosing between performing the surgery or attending the course and I have to compromise. If I don't fix my son's issues, he will struggle for at least 6 months untill we figure out another appointment. Therefore, I have to drop the tutorial and reregister again.
Last week, I stopped by the office and I asked the coordinator about the plan for the new year. She informed me that you will consider doubling the capacity of classrooms. I have a plan to register for the next semester unless you provide me with other suggestions.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Kareem Jaradat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sally Flannigan, I hope that you are doing great. The ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...n his teeth although he is still young. we have been visiting the dentist for seve...
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Line 13, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e course and I have to compromise. If I dont fix my sons issues, he will struggle fo...
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Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Kareem Jaradat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, so, still, therefore, at least, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80841121495 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78414101186 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668224299065 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8978703767 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22818963186 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730060571127 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460656228688 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100285302101 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320130462951 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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