The line chart bow shows the results of a survey giving reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and maje comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph provides the information about the
trade number of people who moved to urban areas from rural areas between 2000 and 2015. There are mainly four reasons that encouraged them to relocate.
The highest rate belonged to study, though, there were 20000 people in 2000 it had gone up signjficantly by 2005 (from 20000 to 50000). Between 2005 and 2010 it peaked to top of the number of 90000.
Another reason was employment which started from 60000 in 2000 and even reached to 90000 i 2010. However, at the last of the period it depicted as the same rate with study, 90000.
People that moved to urban areas represented 20000 in 2000 deu to family and friends. There was not seen any flattering rate of on that, though, it increased from 10000 to 20000. Afterwards, it kept remaining stable for the rest of the period.
Finally, people who relocated to city areas because of adventure had made up 10000 by 2010. Yet it remained stable over the period.
Overall the mains why people settled down in urban areas from rural areas were employment facilities and education.
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- The line chart bow shows the results of a survey giving reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and maje comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 word 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...graph provides the information about the trade number of people who moved to urba...
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...0000 in 2000 and even reached to 90000 i 2010. However, at the last of the period...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81382978723 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31061160401 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5496643296 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972830248748 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367785923803 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330226217431 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557616293752 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267930704621 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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