Some think that teenagers should follow older people’s rules. Others thinks that it is natural for them to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Experts throughout both the developing and developed world would have debated whether teenagers should follow footsteps of their elders or challenge them. This essay will discuss both the views using examples to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
On the one hand, there is ample evidence that states that following rules set by elders is beneficial. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, elders have gained knowledge, wisdom over the years through experiences. Secondly, the years of experience gathered by the elders helps them to evade any bad situations in life. Hence, it is wise to say that elders can set rules for naïve teenagers. For example, recent empirical research by the UK family council demonstrated that 40% of teenagers have express gratitude to their elders for the success achieved through their guidance. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that elder’s maturity, life experiences and wisdom, helps in carving the pathway of success for teenagers.
On the other hand, making it compulsory for teenagers to follow rules set by elders are not considered to be one of the best options. This is largely because, we are now living in a fast moving world, and to cope up we need to be adaptive to changes. Elders are claimed to possess a rigid mind-set and prefer not to change or take risk as per the changing society needs. For example, an extensive study by Oxford University showed that a few teenagers today face disagreement from their elders when they decided to pursue non-conventional life goals. Thus, it is possible to state beyond doubt teenagers are well versed with the latest trends of the fast moving world compared to elders.
To conclude, I firmly believe that in order to be successful in life, teenagers should follow their dreams, however should also consider advice of the elders who have gained wisdom through life experiences. Today, many teenagers in the field of art and sports have achieved success as they have followed their dreams and guidance of the elders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir dreams and guidance of the elders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12012012012 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6495201252 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9827894193 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131346803343 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487093594119 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383823630954 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094301830609 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404424946252 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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