Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Success depends on various things in life. Some people believe that native region plays a very significant role in life to achieve success in future while others maintain that birthplace has no role to play in achieving success in life. This essay will discuss the reasons why birthplace has both positive and negative role to be a successful person.
To begin with, sometimes birthplace has a very crucial role in achieving success. Firstly, people in the upper class neighbourhood got more employment opportunities in comparison to those in far remote areas. For example, a person born in a metro city has more options of white-collar jobs than to those in rural areas. Furthermore, people in the developing countries are healthier and wealthier which makes it easier for natives to achieve success in future.
On the other hand, native region is not important in most of the countries these days. Many countries are meritocracies. People are selected based on their quality, experience and education. Large number of people, for instance, in high profile jobs in western countries belongs to developing counties. Changed patteren of hiring process has removed the importance of native region in achieving success.
To conclude, this essay discussed the ways birthplace plays both type of advantageous and negative role to be accomplished person. In my opinion, despite some benefits, to be a successful person people have nothing to get from the region they belong to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...t easier for natives to achieve success in future. On the other hand, native region is...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
... To conclude, this essay discussed the ways birthplace plays both type of advantage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24894514768 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83712527955 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565400843882 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4379517827 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272248701227 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909073637587 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772153445325 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169896920796 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613789433601 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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