Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Getting success in life depends on many things such as hard work, determination and luck. People generally believe that birthplace has a profound effect on the success of a person. This essay will discuss the ways in which native region affects the future success of a person in both positive and negative ways.
To begin with, native region plays a very beneficial role to be an accomplished person. Firstly, people in the upper-class neighbourhood get better jobs. For example, an individual who got birth in a metro city has more employment opportunities in comparison to those in far remote areas. Furthermore, people whose native region are developed, are healthier and wealthier that make it easier for them to achieve success in future.
On the other hand, birthplace is completely an irrelevant concept and has nothing to do with the success of a person. Most of the countries nowadays are meritocracies, where people are selected based on their experience and qualifications. For instance, the native region of sunder pichai, the ceo of Google, is rural area of India, but got employment in America because of his qualification and experience. Changed hiring process has made native regions role unimportant in achieving success in life.
To conclude, birthplace influenced the future success of a person in various ways, some which are beneficial, and some are harmful. In my opinion, being a successful person is completely an individual phenomenon, and is not related to native region in way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e it easier for them to achieve success in future. On the other hand, birthplace is ...
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Line 9, column 448, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
... Changed hiring process has made native regions role unimportant in achieving success i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24180327869 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98773583829 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581967213115 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9032894318 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.3846153846 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353167210186 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122193246815 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806882543191 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221922362691 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198266933184 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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