You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall.
You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall.
Write a letter to the manager. In the letter:
• describe what the group does
• explain why the group is good for the community
• suggest alternative days and times for practice
Dear sir/madam
I am smith, a singer and member of the band who gathers twice in a week at your community hall for practicing music, writing this letter to ask to allow us possible alternatives as the hall is not available so far.
Since we have a major purpose to serve the community by letting them the world of music which lead them to enjoyment and relaxation, we have trained in the group for last six months at your building. You probably do not know we practice varieties of songs by using different musical instruments. Even, we are capable of performing classical, cinematic and many international songs as a result of the marathon practice. Our purpose is to get familiar with all types of music and instruments and your community hall was a best place to practice well.
I am sure that, if we get proper room as your hall, we will be able to serve the society as I mentioned. So I hereby request you to allow the hall to us on some other days. I think on Monday and Saturday will be okay for you to grand us the permission. Actually we are planning to change the timing to late evening; between 8 pm to 12 am in the midnight.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon
Yours sincerely,
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...instruments and your community hall was a best place to practice well. I am su...
^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon Yours sincerely, Smith
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, so, well, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49099099099 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61760938758 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7490096524 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202073353005 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732156540148 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045807225256 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120261006527 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393503734947 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.