Figures show that in some countries, there is an ever-increasing proportion of population
aged 15 or younger. What do you think the effect of current and future in those countries?
Nowadays, many countries have more and more citizens aged under 15, which exerts many influences in society in various aspects. My view is that this tendency has caused two – sides effects in those nations: disadvantages for the current situation and advantages for the future.
On the one hand, the increase of the young population is a burden of society and the government as mature citizens have to work harder to create the resources to support and raise the young well. For example, parents who have more than three kids now must allocate more force to work in order to earn more money to fulfill their obligations of providing foods, educations and other basic demands of the child. Adults have to pay more taxes to maintain the good social and welfare systems which provide assists not only for the payers but for a lot of children as well. Thus, the greater number of children need to take care of, the more burdens in the shoulder of adults.
On the other hand, those young population will grow up and contribute to social development as well as enrich the nations. It is obvious that in the next few years, those who are now young will become mature and able to work as a vital force of society. They are going to contribute their time, knowledge and strength to build a sustainable society, to complete their responsibilities and obligations for the countries that nurture them well.
In conclusion, this may be a burden of society for now, but this also embodies the positive prospects of country development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80681818182 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57314651526 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.8323125847 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.9 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0638356646763 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027536021112 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247367197659 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454937664289 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330359658019 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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