Writing task 1 (a letter)
Write a letter to your friend who lives in a different country about your plan to work overseas. In your letter say
– What jobs do you plan to do?
– Why do you want to work overseas?
– Ask for some information related to jobs, such as salary, working hours and so on.
Dear Bro
How are you? Hope you enjoy your life with Aussies. I am in the cloud nine as got a high score in the language test and planning to fly to join with you all.
Actually, it's my long cherished dream to get a well paid job in country like Australia. As I am a techno-savvy, I can handle any work in offices and hope to get a good job as technical assistant. As you know, I have good experience as special educator, language trainer and a student counselor. So I hope I will not struggle to hunt job overseas.
Many of my friends encouraged me from migration as we miss our quality time with family, although I have to take this as challenge since I haven't got a House even after five years of my marital life. Even many of family members and other acquaintance either blame me or promote me to find a job which will meet my urgent needs at least for short-term period. So I decided to spare up to five years on migration.
Anyway, it is you who has chance to work in Australia from our fried circle and I guess you might know about the job opportunities there. Please share me about different options which are applicable for my qualifications and skills. Please tell me about the payments and how long we have to work in a day and week.
Hope we will find a good time together there sooner.
Lovely
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Bro How are you? Hope you enjoy your life w...
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Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...y to join with you all. Actually, its my long cherished dream to get a well p...
^^^
Line 9, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will not struggle to hunt job overseas. Many of my friends encouraged me from mi...
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Line 13, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... have to take this as challenge since I havent got a House even after five years of my...
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Line 19, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...find a good time together there sooner. Lovely Smith
^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime together there sooner. Lovely Smith
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, if, so, well, at least, i guess, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39357429719 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52740978014 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9523123957 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1428571429 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152808162687 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512113327874 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436136710114 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808979625814 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623165093066 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.