Today, we have different types of media available to get news about what is happening around the globe. In today's globalize world everyone wants to know about global events that can affect their life. It is completely true that the mass media like TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shapes our opinions and characters and I strongly support this. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss it in detail.
Firstly, let's talk about how mass media can make a positive impact on society. For example, any information can spread very quickly over mass media so the government can use it to send a message to the mass population like the Indian government give advertisement regarding Polio drops program. Mass media is also helpful in sending an alert in case of natural disasters.
On the other hand, the media also have a negative impact on our society. Some time due to wrong news people get panic and some time it leads to an economic or social loss like riots etcetera. For example, recently bloomberge.com published a 10 years old news of Atlanta airways bankruptcy that created panic among its investors and they lost millions of dollars in share market.
Overall, as discussed in the above paragraphs we can say that the mass media including TV, Radio, and Newspaper influence our society and make a high impact on people's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'riots'' or 'riot's'?
Suggestion: riots'; riot's
...eads to an economic or social loss like riots etcetera. For example, recently bloombe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5568951221 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0028357662 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.454545455 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32311916462 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116942782601 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165285186936 0.071462118173 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202630518488 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130010265209 0.0609392437508 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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