Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40298507463 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.74468548027 2.71678728327 138% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.5024630542 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.376183943 50.4703680194 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.5 104.977214359 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 20.9669160288 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.33497536946 431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0656040675881 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400328742116 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266137834393 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400328742116 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266137834393 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 12.6369458128 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 53.1260098522 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 10.9458128079 230% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.94827586207 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.3980295567 212% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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