agree or disagree with the statement. The president should be impeached.
The social explosion of October 28th has left in check the politic representativeness and the neoliberal model, imposed in 80s during the dictatorship of Pinochet. I think if we want a real deep change, Piñera must be constitutionally impeached and judged to make way to a new government that could respond Chilean demands, because he has the lower acceptance registered and already has shown his incapacity to attend people problems, criminalizing social protests and violating systematically human rights.
During the week of october 28th, after the state of emergency declared by the president as a excuse to avoid lootings and vandalism, we relive the wound of having militaries in the streets. The hundreds of people who were hurt with eye injuries or, others, who lost their vision during protests, made that healthcare professionals will alert about a possible instruction to shoot directly in the face. Also exist a ten of dead and a thousand of injured people due to police or military repression, practiced in the state of emergency declared by the president. Although of at least 10.000 police and soldiers in the streets, lootings and vandalism wasn’t stopped, because they didn’t take over of vandals. For example, in a manifestation, I saw a small group looting a store and police at corner didn’t do anything! because they were busy hitting pacific protesters!. Here, again, they’re violating systematically human rights to turn off the social discontentment by the force.
According to Cadem inquiry, the approval of the President registered a historical minimum of 10% the last week, the worst founded for a mandatary in the Chilean history. In my opinion, this is not only because of elitism that there is when is decided let the voluntary vote (less than half of people voted for Piñera in last elections), It’s rather a reflex of the poor way that the President has driven the discontentment. The numbers even suggests that he has lost the support of people who was with him initially. Young people knows that doesn’t have sense keep waiting that the change we need, come from a President who takes advantage of a unequal economic model. I’m an excellent example of this: I’m in debt with a bank for millions by a student loan, because here education is not understood as a right. Maybe somebody may say I’m a resentful, but I guess is necessary to take it as a flag at this moment.
The actual Chilean constitution doesn’t permit a resign from the President, so the only way is the constitutional impeached. The violation to human rights can’t go on and the numbers of people supporting Piñera seems like a joke. Deputies and senator must keep pressing.
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- Which of these forms of protest make the most impact:•Going on strike•Participating in marches•Disseminating information through social media 70
- agree or disagree with the statement. The president should be impeached. 3
- Some people believe that Improving health care, education and pensions is the most urgent, while others believe that electing a constitutional assembly is more important. Which option do you prefer? 70
- Which of these forms of protest make the most impact: •Going on strike•Participating in marches•Disseminating information through social media 76
- Some people believe that electing a constitutional assembly is the best way to address modifications to the constitution, while others believe that a group of experts should be responsible for this task. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The social explosion of October 28th has left in check the politic representa...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... emergency declared by the president as a excuse to avoid lootings and vandalism,...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'exists'.
Suggestion: exists
...ion to shoot directly in the face. Also exist a ten of dead and a thousand of injured...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...lice at corner didn't do anything! because they were busy hitting pacific proteste...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...from a President who takes advantage of a unequal economic model. I'm an exc...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hilean constitution doesn't permit a resign from the President, so the only way is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, at least, for example, i guess, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2304.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04740396376 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1469999738 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.529411765 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3529411765 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714098058368 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217607021841 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021184183251 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400381743691 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206913052626 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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