Many believe that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and big companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that preventing environmental degradation is the responsibility of national authorities and large enterprises instead of individuals. I completely disagree with this idea since I believe that both individuals and the government and huge firms should collaborate in tackling the environment-related issue.
On the one hand, the government and huge businesses play a pivotal role in alleviating environmental damage. To begin with, government should take stringent action of promoting the use of green materials while minimizing the over-consumption of disposable materials. For example, the state authority in Canberra, Australia has enacted a law to strictly prohibit single-use shopping bags within the state territory whereas citizens are strongly stimulated to use biodegradable bags such as paper or cloth bags for their routine life. In terms of enterprise, they take responsibility for improving the awareness campaigns of their employees such as organizing voluntary projects and investing in the green movement as well.
On the other hand, everyone can make a big difference by spreading out the responsibility of themselves to their community. Take Vietnam as a prime example, with a journey throughout Vietnam, a teacher named Thang shared his experience about the need for cutting down on emissions with social networking websites, leading to increasing plenty of people who utilize bicycles rather than cars. Another simple but feasible step that each person can do is establishing a green and sustainable lifestyle. For instance, not only households could opt to use energy-efficient equipment such as the compact light bubbles or the energy-saving heater but they may also rely on environmentally friendly devices like solar panels to generate electricity and hot water in their houses.
In conclusion, individuals are considered as an integral role in preventing the destruction of the natural world. Without each of the people, the national and local authorities and large companies will find it impossible to gain their goals in their policies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65286624204 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3378606995 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0922323507 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.916666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14756456453 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527008537989 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443439121667 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796678054526 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395741970023 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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