Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that human activity allows the Earth is a better place to live in. Although factories produce a variety of products for people, technological development allows us to communicate better, and people are enabled to transfer where ever they want by inventing different kinds of transportation, I personally believe that human activity has harmed to the Earth for three main reasons.
The first reason is that a lot of species of animals has become endangered by human activity. The number of settlement is increasing every year and, people are building more and more constructions to shelter them and factories to meet their needs. For example, as a result of the increasing European's population, most of the European countries build companies in Africa because there is more land to use. However, destroying animal's natural habitats lead decline for number of animals. Therefore, wild animals become endangered or even extinct.
Secondly, Human activities such as driving car, producing too much plastic, and using gas to feel warm at winter lead pollution on the Earth. For instance, some kind of plastic cannot able to be recycled . So, people are caused harm on the Earth by using plastic items. The other example is that the air pollution causes people to be sick such as asthma.
Finally, even though technological development allows individuals to work, communicate, and even playing a game by using technological devices, they are more risky to have a mental disease such as . For instance, the age of children who use a technological device is decreasing every year, which means more and more children exposes to an utopia. When a child started to a school, he will expect the school as colorful and joyful as the one in his tablet, but the real school cannot be. Therefore, he will have a mental disease such as social phobia when he enrolled the real world rather than the utopia.
To conclude, there are number of great investment to make people's life easier. However, disadvantages of these investments outweigh the advantages. The earth is harmed by human activity, and it is not a better place to live in.
- Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 73
- n some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. 65
- In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. 73
- Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 86
- If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd of plastic cannot able to be recycled . So, people are caused harm on the Earth...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e risky to have a mental disease such as . For instance, the age of children who u...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...means more and more children exposes to an utopia. When a child started to a schoo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05070422535 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78743716729 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552112676056 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4782908588 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6111111111 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2877526369 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100752956901 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126705767049 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172322317574 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10776371983 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.