Can money bring happiness? What are the factors for happiness?
Happiness is the feelings which all the creature's in the world have. When we see or get something which we like so much, some happy hormones send signal to the brain and make us feel like we are happy. There are various factors for our happiness, each factor depends on each individuals like's and dislike's. Happiness not only depends on the Money, it also depends on other factors such as, Food, Love, Games, Friends, Family, Driving, Etc.,
Money is also one of the reason for the happiness, but we should be clear that it is not the only source of happiness. With Money we can go for Movies, the places which we love, Have good food in restaurants, etc., But we should understand that we can also be happy without money by spending time with the beloved people.
There are Various factors for happiness such as, Meeting our old friends, Playing games in the playground without spending any money, Having good home cooked food, chit chatting with our friends and siblings, Sleeping Well, Good health, Prayers, etc.
Atlast it is concluded that, Money is not the only factor for our happiness, again it depend on how we think what makes us happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 87, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...only factor for our happiness, again it depend on how we think what makes us happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75247524752 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27677567618 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 379.143842365 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1897113551 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.142857143 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320042391454 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155998703379 0.0925447433944 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442853399665 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196570340608 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277132804446 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 53.1260098522 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.9458128079 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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